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Post by hagiz on Nov 15, 2008 17:19:23 GMT -5
I will write horror stories using people around here in isurvivor, kinda what I did in ibb but this time it will be a bunch short stories. hope you enjoy it.
here's chapter 1 starring Brittany and Bridget.
CHAPTER 1: What the fuck?
That night, Brittany Derouin was driving her ’97 Ford Aspire down the icy road of Canadian countryside. The road was so dark since it was new moon that day, the fact that the weather suddenly decided to produce fog didn’t help either. The high beam of her car couldn’t even penetrate the thickness of the fog.
“What are we doing here?” asked Bridget, Brittany’s college friend who sat next to her playing with her iphone. “It’s Halloween night. We’re supposed to be out, dressed in a slutty nurse costume trying to get patients to play doctor with us, not driving in the middle of the road to nowhere.”
Brittany glared at Bridget, “Hey, I didn’t ask you to come along!”
“You think I would let my best friend drive alone in the middle of the night to meet up with a guy in a cabin somewhere up on the mountain? Haven’t you watched Friday the 13th? Don’t you know that cabin, night and mountain equals being chased by some heavyweight wrestling guy with machete? Who’s this mysterious guy anyway?”
“Bridget, you watched too many horror films,” said Brittany as she giggled. “Sandy is harmless. He can’t even kill a cockroach let alone kill me.”
“Sandy… we’re meeting Sandy? Are you fucking kidding me?”
Before Brittany could answer Bridget’s question, her phone rang.
“Yellow?” answered Brittany.
“Where the fuck are you?” a deep male voice but slightly feminine could be heard at the end of the line.
“Sandy, chill. I’m on my way. I told you, I couldn’t start my car because of all these ice and plus I had to pick up Bridget. She wanted to come too.”
“Oh My God. You’re bringing that hideous girl here? Are you nuts? You know she despises me after that incident in Allan’s cabin last summer.”
“Oh….I forget…. Sorry… But there’s nothing I can do. We’re too far to turn back.”
“Fine, bring the bitch here but if she says anything, I’ll dropkick her on the jugular. Just hurry,” yelled Sandy. “I don’t --- AARRGHHH”
The yell made Brittany panic, “Sandy, Sandy, what happened to you?” All she can hear was the busy tone. “Hello??”
“What happened?” asked Bridget.
“I don’t know. Sandy just yelped and the connection got cut off.” Brittany dialed Sandy’s number once again. It went straight to voice mail.
“Meh, he probably saw a cockroach or something. Don’t worry about it. By the way, you should’ve told me that you’re meeting with Sandy. I wouldn’t come with you. Didn’t you know what he did to me last summer? He pushed me into the lake just to embarrass me.”
“Bridget, I know. He told me the same thing but at this moment there’s nothing we can do. I can’t turn back especially in this fog. You and he would just have to be adults and settle things up when we get there.”
Bridget pouted but decided not to continue arguing. She just slipped back into her chair and started to play with her iphone again. Brittany sighed before she asked Bridget, “Great, now you’re all mad!”
“No, I’m not!”
“Yes, you are!” Brittany didn’t pay attention when suddenly a giant moose came out from behind the fog.
“Brittany!!!! Watch out!!” shrieked Bridget.
Brittany saw the moose and it was approaching fast. Brittany did what she thought was best and floored the brake pedal. The car stopped into a screeching halts inches away from the moose. Brittany and Bridget sighed deeply as they watched the moose walked away with grace into the woods.
“Oh my God, that was close,” said Bridget.
“Yes it was indeed. Thank God I had the brake oil replaced two days ago.”
“Let’s just go!” said Bridget as she tried to fix her hair. Brittany started the car and pressed the gas pedal. But one second later the car trampled something hard. There’s something underneath the car.
“What is that?” Brittany went out of the car. As she checked under the car, there was nothing there. “That’s weird, what did we run over?” asked Brittany to Bridget who had came out of the car too.
Bridget shrugged, “Let’s just go! We must’ve hit a rock or something.”
Brittany checked once again underneath the car, still nothing there. She finally gave up and went inside the car again. As she slipped back onto her seat, she felt something warm underneath her butt. Brittany jumped out and what she saw next was a total nightmare. A bright red baby placenta was on that seat. The blood sipped through the seat cover making it all red.
“What the fuck?” cried Brittany.
TO BE CONTINUED to CHAPTER 2.
please comment on it and pardon the grammatical error if there's any.
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Post by brian on Nov 15, 2008 20:31:59 GMT -5
-_-
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hagiz
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Post by hagiz on Nov 15, 2008 20:43:26 GMT -5
PART 2: The Silence
Brittany drove her car as fast as she can, trying to get away from the nightmare she just had. An hour earlier she had found a baby placenta that mysteriously had been stashed on her car seat. Bridget was so hysterical when she saw that placenta. Brittany had to slap her around just to calm her down. As soon as Brittany threw away the placenta, they hit the road as quick as possible.
Brittany pulled into the nearest motel they could find. She didn’t feel to drive any longer after all those incidents.
It was 11.30 pm when Brittany and Bridget settled in the room they rented. It was a dingy room. You can see the water stains on the corner of the room as mold grew near it and you could hear rats chirp somewhere nearby. Dust compiled on top of the table.
“Oh my God, it’s my baby, oh my God, oh my God!” yelled Bridget as she walked back and forth around the room. “Oh my God!”
Brittany cut Bridget’s moan as she barked, “Bridget, shut up! Just chill. Why are you freaking out like that? Ever since you saw that placenta, all that come out from your mouth is just high pitch calling the Big Man. Guess what Bridget? He’s busy! What are you talking about? You don’t have a baby.”
That successfully shut Bridget up but a second later, she dropped down in tears. Brittany approached Bridget and hugged her. “Bridget, what’s wrong? Tell me.”
“Brittany, I did the most horrible things.”
“Now, now, Bridget I know you. You are a wonderful and the nicest person I ever met. You can’t possibly do anything bad.”
“But, I did. If you know what I did, you would not think that way of me.”
“What do you mean?” Brittany sat on the edge of the bed. “What did you do?”
Awkward silence filled the room. Bridget sighed before she finally talked, “You know why I haven’t been around lately?”
Brittany shook her head, “Well, you told me you’ve been away to visit your uncle in Newfoundland.”
“It was a lie. I went away because I was pregnant.” Brittany’s eyes bulged, “Pregnant??!! When?”
“I was pregnant last summer when we were in Allan’s cabin. I had a huge argument with Matty that night and I needed a shoulder to cry on and… and…”
“You had sex with the first guy who comforted you?” Bridget nodded. Brittany investigated further, “Who was it?”
“You know him.”
“Who was it? Just tell me.”
“Okay don’t be mad. It’s… Sandy.”
Brittany’s eyes bulged out of their sockets even more. “Sandy? No way! Are you sure?”
“Yes, I was there too Brit, I’m sure.”
“But Sandy is gay. How did you make his thing work for you?”
“Well I used low voice and kept telling him to stroke my schlong and it did the trick.”
Brittany shook her head, trying to digest all the new information she just got. “I’m sorry, but I don’t know what to say. What happened after that?”
“When I found out, I told Sandy about it and instead of owning to it, he threw me into the lake. He called me a liar bitch, that’s when I figured he doesn’t want anything to do with it. When we’re home, I tried to hide the bump but Timmy found out and he immediately called Matty asking him to marry me.”
Brittany cut Bridget off with her theory, “But you and Matty never had sex so he immediately knew that you’ve cheated on him. Oh, so that’s why you guys broke up.”
“Yeah so Timmy tried to send me away so I can have the baby secretly. But… but… I went to underground doctor instead… and… and…” Bridget once again broke down in tears. “I had my baby killed. I killed a human being Britt!” Brittany rushed to hug Bridget once again. “There, there, Bridget. Don’t be sad. I understand you have to do that. There’s no need to panic.”
“You don’t get it. Lately I have been seeing weird things. I kept hearing baby cries at night and I kept finding diapers in my closet. I thought I was seeing things, but after what happened tonight I knew it is real. I mean you saw it too. It was a placenta Britt. Out of nowhere.”
“Bridget, it probably was just a prank someone pulled. We ---“ Suddenly they heard a faint baby cries. Bridget cried, “Listen to that Britt, you believe me now?”
A second later, someone banged on the door, almost breaking it. The two girls shrieked at the same time. “Who is that?” yelled Brittany.
No answer and the banging got louder and louder before it finally stopped.
Brittany tiptoed towards the door and peeked through the peek hole. There’s no one outside. Brittany started to get goose bumps.
“This is getting ridiculous. There is no ghost in this ---“
Before Brittany could finish her sentence, the door broke down. The two girls screamed so loud and crumpled into the closet without looking who did the breaking.
Inside the dark moldy closet, both of the girls tried to catch their breath. “What is it?” whispered Bridget.
“I don’t know!” whispered Brittany back. “Let me check!” Brittany peeked between the cracks of the blinds. After the dusts settled down, Brittany could see….no one. “There’s no one outside. The door must be old and it broke down by itself. Right Bridget?”
No answers from behind her.
“Bridget?” Brittany looked over to look for Bridget.
A pair of red eyes and a deformed baby face welcomed her vision instead. The creature grinned as Brittany screamed on top of her lungs breaking the silence
The silence of the new moon.
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Post by jermaine on Nov 15, 2008 20:43:39 GMT -5
Day for you
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Post by bethr96 on Nov 15, 2008 20:49:29 GMT -5
what a great imagination!!!!
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Post by katy on Nov 15, 2008 20:49:32 GMT -5
there wasnt many grammatical error hendrick, dont worry my favorite parts... SANDY: “Where the fuck are you?” a deep male voice but slightly feminine could be heard at the end of the line. yea..thats about it! lol and whats with all the cockroach references??
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Post by brian on Nov 15, 2008 21:04:07 GMT -5
lmao
“Yes, I was there too Brit, I’m sure.”
“But Sandy is gay. How did you make his thing work for you?”
“Well I used low voice and kept telling him to stroke my schlong and it did the trick.”
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Post by brian on Nov 15, 2008 21:05:23 GMT -5
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Post by katy on Nov 15, 2008 21:08:30 GMT -5
lmfao omg...these are hilarious...
you better keep posting hendrick
<333 youuuu
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Post by Bridget on Nov 15, 2008 21:39:00 GMT -5
Oh no, I r skank
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Post by Bridget on Nov 15, 2008 21:39:36 GMT -5
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Post by Courtney on Nov 15, 2008 21:45:05 GMT -5
Brian: The Future J.K Rowling
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Post by brian on Nov 15, 2008 21:48:44 GMT -5
Brian: The Future J.K Rowling what? hendrick is the genius here in this thread. what did i ever write that makes you say that?
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Post by Courtney on Nov 15, 2008 21:51:17 GMT -5
I'm losing my eyesight I swear I thought you wrote this.... Hendrick: The Stephen King
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hagiz
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Post by hagiz on Nov 15, 2008 21:56:21 GMT -5
thank you courtney. you're beautiful. don't worry you will be featured in this story too. every contestants here will be.
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Post by Courtney on Nov 15, 2008 22:22:47 GMT -5
omg Can I be the Slut who makes Sandy a Bi-Sexual
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Post by Nathan on Nov 16, 2008 14:21:35 GMT -5
I'm gay, make me a character. lol
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Post by hagiz on Nov 16, 2008 20:37:49 GMT -5
PART 3: Catch a prey
“Sandy, mountie!” yelled Scott from across the cabin’s main office. On the other side of the office, a skinny but muscular latino man was dancing around while listening to his ipod.
“Sandy!!” exclaimed Scott once again. Sandy took off his earphone, Lindsay Lohan song was blasted from it. “What?”
“Mountie office! On the phone!” yelled Scott once again.
“Oh, okay.” Sandy rushed to pick up the phone. “Hello! Yes, I am okay.” While Sandy talked to the mountie, Scott made a gesture to Sandy that he’s going to go outside. Sandy nodded in acknowledgement. Sandy was all alone inside the half-lit office, with the light flickered every once a while.
“Allan, what can I do for you today?”
“Mr. Pomales,” said the mountie from the end of the line with his baritone voice. “I’m here to advice you to close out your camp. There has been a jailbreak and Jack Carpenter is one of the escapees and he is rumored to be heading to Emerald Lake.”
“Jack Carpenter? The Jack Carpenter, the masked killer who killed 10 people last year?”
“Yes,” assured the mountie again. “The same Jack Carpenter.”
“Officer, I can’t close out my camp. People already paid a lot of money for this.” Sandy laughed as he ate one of his chicken nuggets. “If Jack Carpenter would go somewhere, I doubt he will choose this place. I wouldn’t be worried about it.”
“Okay, if you think so Mr. Pomales but you’ve been warned. If there’s anything, call our office,” said the mountie before he hang up.
Sandy put on his earphone and started to dance again. One minute later, he suddenly remembered something. He glanced at the clock on the wall. It’s 3 minutes past 10. “Where the fuck is Brittany, she’s supposed to be here an hour ago.”
Once again he picked up his Penguin-decorated-phone and dialed Brittany’s number. After a few ringing, a cute girly voice can be heard, “Yellow?”
"Where the fuck are you?” shouted Sandy.
“Sandy, chill. I’m on my way. I told you, I couldn’t start my car because of all these ice and plus I had to pick up Bridget. She wanted to come too.”
Hearing Bridget’s name, Sandy’s eyes bulged. Everything that happened last summer flashed in front of his eyes. “Oh My God. You’re bringing that hideous girl here? Are you nuts? You know she despises me after that incident in Allan’s cabin last summer.”
“Oh….I forget…. Sorry… But there’s nothing I can do. We’re too far to turn back.” Said Brittany.
Sandy sighed. If he wanted Brittany to arrive on time, he would have to accept that Bridget would be coming along. “Fine, bring the bitch here but if she says anything, I’ll dropkick her on the jugular. Just hurry,” yelled Sandy. Suddenly there’s a wolf howling from a far that startled Sandy a little bit. Sandy grabbed one of his chicken nuggets and bit it with anger. He’s too busy being angry that he didn’t see a pale hand start to approach him. Sandy screamed at the phone once again, “I don’t --- AARRGHHH”
Sandy jumped up in surprise and threw the phone away, knocking the chicken nuggets onto the floor too as a result. It caused the suitor to shriek in unison with Sandy like a bunch of high school girls.
When Sandy finally saw who the suitor was, he stopped screaming. “Who the fuck are you?” yelled Sandy as he checked the young white boy with jet black hair. “I’m sorry if I scared you,” said the boy. “My name is Chad.” The sight of the pretty Chad calmed Sandy a little, “What do you want?”
“I was hiking with my choir group through the forest and they left me behind.” Chad took a breather as he continued his saying. “I was so glad when I found this place. Could I use your phone?”
Sandy scanned Chad up and down. Sandy was pretty intrigued by Chad. “Yes sure ---” Sandy turned to grab the phone but then he saw that the phone had been broken into pieces. “--- you can if we can fix it.”
“You don’t have any other phone? I need to call my tutor. She’s in a motel downtown.”
“No, that’s our only one and cellphone won’t work since there’s no reception around here. You know if you need to go to town, I can take you tomorrow morning. I have to buy new phone anyway. Meanwhile you can rest here for the night.”
“Oh, that would be so great!” exclaimed Chad as he smiled. The smile on his face made Chad cuter in Sandy’s eyes. Chad looked around looking at his surroundings. “What is this place?”
“It’s my winter camp.” Sandy continued when he saw Chad looked confused. “Well it’s basically designed to accommodate people who are bored with their ordinary life so they would find the meaning of life again. In order to do that, we design fun challenges and quizzes for them, that way they will find their competitive side again so they will be able to dive into society again.”
“Ah… interesting. I guess nowadays people are desperate to find an escape from their life that they’re willing to pay whoever can provide it. Where’s everyone by the way?” commented Chad.
“Well, right now there’s only me and Scotty, wherever he is right now. I’m still waiting for my other fellow supervisor to come before I officially welcome the campers tomorrow morning. So yeah, there’s no one here.” Sandy walked towards the fridge and grabbed a bottle of beer. “Do you want something to drink? And after that maybe I can show you your room.”
“Sure, I’ll take whatever you have.”
Sandy threw a bottle of beer towards Chad. “Now if you follow me, I can show you the place where you can rest for tonight.” Sandy started to walk out of the main office, missing the evil grin on Chad’s face.
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As Sandy dragged his feet across the fields, he was trying to make conversation with Chad, “So are you a Soprano?” That question seemed to startle Chad as if he didn’t know the answer. “What?”
“In the choir, are you a Sooprano?”
“Uhm, yes yes. I am. Are we still far?”
“No not at all. As a matter of fact, we’re here,” said Sandy as he gestured towards a small cabin next to the forest. There’s no other cabin near it so if you scream, no one will hear you. “It’s not much but it’s adequate.”
“No, no, it fine!” assured Chad. “You know, I really appreciate all you’ve done for me. I promise I’ll repay you for your kindness.”
“Okay, I’ll let you alone so you can rest.” Sandy started to walk away when suddenly he heard Chad calling him. “Are you sure you don’t want to come in with me?”
That stopped Sandy’s feet. Sandy turned and smiled, “Sure, if you insist.” Sandy turned back and entered the cabin once again missing Chad’s evil grin. Tarantula caught his prey.
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Passion and heat made Sandy’s body sweat like crazy as he rode Chad from behind. They both exclaimed as they reached high points at the same time. Moment later they fell on the bed from tiredness.
“That was awesome,” said Chad.
“I know,” teased Sandy as he jumped out of the bed and started to put on his clothes.
“Where are you going?”
“I have to go back, My fellow supervisor must be looking for me.”
Chad jumped out of the bed and hugged Sandy from behind. “Can’t you stay?”
Sandy turned and kissed Chad so hard. Sandy didn’t realize, on Chad’s hand there’s a small knife that he has been hiding on his clothes. Chad raised the knife slowly as Sandy contemplated to stay or not, ready to stab Sandy from behind.
“I don’t know if I should do this or not,” said Sandy. “Oh, don’t worry, I don’t think it matters what you think anymore.” said Chad in a sudden change of voice. This is for my sister that you killed!!“ Chad aimed the knife towards Sandy’s neck and stabbed Sandy.
But… he was too slow. Before the knife touched Sandy’s neck, he snapped Chad’s neck first. Loud thump could be heard as Chad’s soulless body fell to the floor.
Sandy looked at his latest prey as he whispered, “You think I didn’t recognize you, Jack Carpenter?”
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Post by Nathan on Nov 16, 2008 20:45:18 GMT -5
oooo... it's getting good.
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Post by jermaine on Nov 16, 2008 20:59:53 GMT -5
oo...intresting
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Post by brooklynMATT on Nov 16, 2008 21:09:55 GMT -5
SCANDALOUS!
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Post by brian on Nov 16, 2008 21:13:34 GMT -5
this has turned into isurv1vor: porn stories
why am i not surprised henny?
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Post by Riley <3 on Nov 17, 2008 0:27:33 GMT -5
Oh no, I r skank LOL Bridget... Best line ever
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Post by Riley <3 on Nov 17, 2008 0:28:25 GMT -5
I'm gay, make me a character. lol lamo you ARE a character
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Post by Riley <3 on Nov 17, 2008 0:33:22 GMT -5
hahahha
penguin decorate phone.. ah, Sandy.. you perv
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